My First English Poem Trying

I write a poem about love. My first English poet is this and hopefully you love it.

I LOVE YOU !!!

When I looked you
My eyes shiver for you
If I mention about my thinking
What would it matter?

Again the sun rises
I get up from my bed
Again i miss
And my heart is more red

Day after day i want to sing
But i cry in this song
Everyday Must this song be sad
My hands are wet

When the sun dropped
A cloud is tearful
Perhaps it cry for us
Perhaps I say you
I love you !!!

                               Metin Okkalı